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Post by kieladar on Sept 21, 2013 22:27:10 GMT -8
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Post by Swatz on Sept 22, 2013 7:25:45 GMT -8
I've read it and what I wrote no longer exists so you got this bro.
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Post by commando0942 on Sept 22, 2013 8:55:21 GMT -8
I think some improvements could be made to it.
1. Maybe have it that they were re-assigned due to numerous friendly fire accidents?(Mlanes unreported cause of death?)
2. The LT being a little bit more annoying(maybe a obviously fake German accent too?)
Besides that, looks good.
I think that it might be good to have another meeting and just run through the script and see how well it flows.
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